中一~10分!!!!!!超急!!明天要交了!!請為我除錯!!

2007-10-01 6:52 pm
佢話要我睇下有冇漏字或錯字~佢要我改左佢~~

Hi,Emily.Is you awake?

Hi,Alex.Yes,Iam.I feel very tired though.I wants to go to bed.
Don't go yet!It's only nine thirty.I usually don't goes to bed till eleven.
My mum always lets me stay up until midnight,but not very often.
更新1:

My partens let me stay up late twice week-on Fridays and Saturdays and Saturdays.I often spend these nights watching DVDs.My brother sometimes watch them with me.We don't like the same kinds of films,but he always try to choose films he likes.Do like watching films?

更新2:

Yes,I am.I prefer to watch them at the cinema though.I don't have a lot of DVDs at home.My mum don't buy many of them.She prefers to watch TV.She never niss her favourite programme.It's on at eight thirty every Sundays evening. Does you like watching TV then?

更新3:

No,I don't.I rarely watch TV.Most programmes is boring. There's a programme about Japan on Thursday.It lookes interesting.It's about a festival that happens one a year in summer.

更新4:

It sound like an interesting programme.However, I always have dinner with my relatives on Thursdays.I seldom gets home early.

回答 (1)

2007-10-01 7:20 pm
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Please see correction in BOLD.

Hi,Emily.ARE you awake?

Hi,Alex.Yes,Iam.I feel very tired though.I WANT to go to bed.
Don't go yet! It's only nine thirty.I usually don't GO to bed till eleven.
My mum always lets me stay up until midnight,but not very often.


My PARENTS let me stay up late twice week-on Fridays AND Saturdays. I often spend these nights watching DVDs.My brother sometimes WATCHES them with me.We don't like the same
KIND of films,but he always TRIES to choose films he likes.Do YOU like watching films?

Yes,I am.I prefer to watch them at the cinema though.I don't have a lot of DVDs at home.My mum DOESN'T buy many of them.She prefers to watch TV.She never MISSES her favourite programme.It's on at eight thirty every SUNDAY evening.
DO you like watching TV then?

No,I don't.I rarely watch TV.Most programmes ARE boring.
There's a programme about Japan on THURSDAYS.It LOOKS interesting.It's about a festival that happens ONCE a year in summer.

It SOUNDS like an interesting programme.However, I always have dinner with my relatives on Thursdays.I seldom GET home early.
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