Help me to check the grammer

2007-10-01 4:47 am
1. ' You look smart, Pete, ' I said.
' But you look strange ,Pete. Your costume is oversize!' Andriy replied.

2. We visited other classes and shiut ' Trick or Treat' . Some classmates gave us some sweets but some weren"t.

3.(Guess: WHAT IS MY PLAN?)

4. Pete and I were very happy that day because we got lots of sweets and played happily.

5. We can also make more new friends and know more about our school .

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2007-10-01 7:43 pm
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1. ' You look smart, Pete, ' I said.

' But you look strange ,Pete. Your costume is oversized!' Andriy replied.

Remark: oversized is an adjective


2. We visited other classes and played ' Trick or Treat' . Some classmates gave us some sweets but some didn't .

3.(Guess: WHAT IS MY PLAN?)



4. Pete and I were very happy that day because we got lots of sweets and we played joyfully.

Remark: "joyfully" is used instead to avoid repeating "happy" stated earlier.

5. We can also make more new friends and know more about our school .
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2007-10-01 5:35 am
1. 'You look very smart, Pete,' I said.
'But you kind of look very strange to me, Pete. Your costume is too big for you!' Andriy Replid.

2. (is ok)
3. (is quite good)

4. Pete and I were ery happy on the day. It is because we got a lot of sweets and felt very happy.

5. We also make some new friends and know more about our school.


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