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1. My friend all dressed up like the wizards but I couldn't because of my
oversized costume. I looked quiet strange that day!

Comment:
(1) It is more appropriate to use 'like' instead of 'as'.
(2) 'the' should be deleted since you are dressed up not only like some
particular wizards, but all wizards.
(3) 'oversize' should be replaced by 'oversized' since oversize is a noun,
which is inappropriate for us to describe a noun --> costume.

2. In the school day , there were lots of games to play, such as 'apple bobbing' and
'Trick or Treat'.

Comment:
The game is often called as "Trick or Treat", which belongs to a "noun".

1 missing

quiet- quite

1. My friend all dressed up as the wizards but I couldn't because of my oversize costume. I looked quiet strange that day!

2. In the school day , there were lots of games to play, such as 'apple bobbing' and
'Trick or Treating'.

Proofread
1. My friends all dressed up as wizards but I couldn't because of my oversized costume. I looked quiet and strange that day!

2. On the school day , there were lots of games to play, such as 'apple bobbing' and
'Trick or Treating'.

1. My friend all dressed up as the wizards but I couldn't because of my oversize costume. I looked quiet strange that day!

2. In the school day , there were lots of games to play, such as 'apple bobbing' and
'Trick or Treating'.

Mistakes:

My friend all dressed up as the wizards but I couldn't because of my oversize costume. I looked quiet strange that day!
Shall be
My friends all dressed up like wizards but I couldn't because of my oversize costume. I looked quiet strange that day!

2007-09-30 12:08:13 補充：
'Trick or Treating'should be'Trick or Treat