英文题 20分！快快快下

2007-09-29 4:41 pm

帮帮我看一下有没有语法上的错误
Yesterday, while I was thinking about the symbol of the

Chinese, first thing I got was the dark hair. It was a really

symbol of the Chinese, or even the Asian. And also I feel

proud of my dark hair, it shows to the others that I am a

chinese. When I saw some Chinese guys dyed their hair

to red, blue, or orange,I was feeling confuse that wasn't

the dark hair color much better than those colors?

更新1:

我地个英文阿SIR要求我地在这一段上全部用晒Past Progressive，5该各位啊！

回答 (5)

用戶20237

2007-09-29 5:05 pm

✔ 最佳答案

1) Not: the symbol of the Chinese
because Chinese is a proper noun, you don't need an article in front of proper nouns.
2) Not: It was a really symbol of the Chinese
you don't need an article in front of an adverb. (really)
3) Not: It shows to the others
You don't need an article in front of plural nouns
4) Not: I am a chinese
You don't need an article in front of an adjective
5) Not: Some Chinese guys dyed
Either: Some chinese guys dye OR some chinese guys who dyed
6) Not: I was feeling confuse
I was feeling confused
7) Not: Wasn't the dark hair
Same thing, you don't need an article in front of an adjective

Overall, good job!

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[匿名]

2007-09-29 5:08 pm

excellent!沒有任何錯誤

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用戶178225

2007-09-29 5:03 pm

很好!沒有任何錯誤!~0~

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