請幫我改下d文法呀!!!

2007-09-25 6:38 am
In principle one, because people face tradeoffs, so some of the large supermarkets or chain store although know their merchandise overdue, they also will not to abandon them. Cause as long as someone to buy it, there is tradeoffs and the firm can get more money.

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2007-09-25 9:41 am
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May I have some suggestion as below for your reference: -----

In principle, based on tradeoffs, people would buy some overdue merchandize which the large supermarkets or chain store should know it but they are not willing to abandon them for getting more money.

May I also advise you to pay attention to the use of conjunction such as because, so, although.... which is indeed too much in the context.


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