希望各位哥哥/姐姐能教我英文阿!(10點分數)

Today is Sunday, I go out early in the morning the mouth takes a walk. Having reached 9:00, I go to the restaurant to have a meal, very delicious. I and my friend peter go to ocean park to play at 10:00. Has played a lot of very amazing games, for example: Roller coaster, the jumping out of the building machine,etc.. Arrive noon, I go one ask delicious restaurant of restaurant have a meal, where 's food the very much your one, a cup of coke wants $15, but because I play too tiredly, very hungry, so I buy the food with $156. Have passed for a happy Sunday like this, but will write from memory on Tuesday, so should go home in warm book A hard !

Today is Sunday, I was going out in the early morning. Around 9 am, I had breakfast in the restaurant and it was very delicious. After that, Peter and I went to ocean park at ten We played lots of exciting games such as roller coaster and so on. In the afternoon,
I had having my lunch in another restaurant The foods there are very expensive. A cup of coke takes $15. I spent $156 for my lunch as I felt very tired and hungry. I had a wonderful Sunday but I have dictation in the coming Tuesday. So I have to work hard for this.

Today is Sunday,I went out very early this morning.At 9:00 am,I went to a restaurant for having breakfast,Yummy!At 10:00 I go to the Ocean Park with my friend,Peter,Played so many Exciting games such as Roaster coaster(I do not know the Spelling of 過山車,跳樓機)so on.In the afternoon,I went to "Yummy Restaurant" to have breakfast.The food the restaurant sold is very expensive,A coke cost $15,But I am so tired so I buy food with $156.Just that,I had a happy holiday,but I have to have dictation on tuesday,so I must go back home for Revision!
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