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I am now studying in one secondary school in Lam Tin; I love my school. The teachers are kind and patient. Everyone in the school is frienly. I have made new friends and have fun with them during studying time, we learnt somethings new everyday. I enjoy working group projects because we help each others. In this school, there are many clubs and society, I am one of the members of Badminton Club, I have training every Friday. Does your sister plays badminton?

How about you? Do you like living in England? My cousins live in England also, but they don’t like living in there. Do you make new friends? Are they nice? Tell him about your life in England, do you have an e-mail account?

I have one and I use it a lot, can you send me an e-mail to [email protected]? I don’t have yours.

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I am now studying in a secondary school in Lam Tin and I love my school very much. The teachers are kind and patient. Everyone in the school is very friendly. I have fun studying and playing with my new friends. We learnt something new everyday in school. I enjoy working in group projects because we can help each other. There are many after school clubs too. I am currently a member of the Badminton Club, I practise badminton every Friday after school. Nowadays, does your sister still plays badminton?

How about you? Do you like living in England? My cousins live in England also, but they don’t like living in there. Have you make any new friends? Are they nice? Tell him (me) about your life in England.

Do you have an e-mail account? I have one and I use it a lot. If you have an e-mail account would you please send an e-mail to me at: [email protected] because I don’t have your e-mail address.