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2007-09-23 10:57 pm
Durian is very stinky but the fruit is sweet . This time, the hunter’s face was filled with happiness and shouted, “My God, this is the fruit in the legend, Mmm mmm... (Eating sound), it is so tasty! It tastes like ice cream, let me one more bite, really tasty.”
At this moment, the lion heard that the fruit is super tasty; his saliva has dropped so much that it almost floods the house and started to share the legend fruit with the hunter.
Next day, all the animals in the jungle were sick .

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2007-09-23 11:11 pm
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If you don't mind, here is my version...

Durina is a fruit with a very distinct smell.

A hunter found a durian and became very intrigued.
"My God, this is the fruit from the legend. Mmmm.....It's so delicious! It tastes like ice cream. Let me have one more bite... mmm... yummy..." he shouted.

At this point, the lion heard the hunter's praise for the fruit and started dribbling like flood. He went over to the hunter and ate some of his durian.

All the animals in the jungle were sick the next day.
2007-09-23 11:33 pm
Durian is a type of fruit that smells stinky but tastes good and sweet. The hunter was very happy and shouted "This is the fruit in of the legend, it's yummy!!! Let me have some more!! It's really tasty!!" When the lion heared that it was a great fruit, he started to taste some and share the fruit with the hunter.
On the next day, all the animals in the jungle were sick.
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