有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

Other people of three employees are possibly exchanged some now and then hold concurrent jobs or entire time. They are all good request me to my even them to make some operations to like afterwards. My responsibility including the assistance and the open bar morning, makes the coffee or the tea, the cashier, wipes down the table, the alternative goods, washes with the plate. Bar Presse provides the minority more fast-foods and the ethyl alcohol. Its size is bigger than the bar palette; Therefore, the people can the demand time drink with cup of coffee and the fast-food and the friend.

Others three employees can be exchanged at some time， either part time or full time.，they are all nice to me even though they ask me to do some works as following. My responsibilities are included assist with open bar in the morning, making coffee or tea, cashier, wipe down tables, refill goods, and dish wash. The Bar Presse offers a few more snack and alcohol. Its size is bigger than Bar Palette: hence, people can take a time to have a cup of coffee and snack with friends.


now is more okay..( I think)