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2007-09-22 3:20 am
My name is Juicy Yeung.I live in shatin with my brother.He had study in Shatin IVE 3 years ago.I love to sleeping and listen to music.What will you do on China Moon Festival?
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2007-09-22 6:57 am
My name is Juicy Yeung.I live in ***** with my brother.He studied *****in IVE 3 years ago.I love sleeping and listening to music.What will you do in Mid-autumn Festival?
2007-09-22 3:58 am
My name is Juicy Yeung. I live in ***** with my brother. He studied in ***** IVE three years ago. I love sleeping and listening to music. What will you do in Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival?
2007-09-22 3:48 am
My name is Juicy Yeung.I lam living in ***** with my brother.He had studied in *****, the IVE 3 years ago.I love to sleep and listen to music.What will you do in the Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival?
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2007-09-22 3:26 am
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