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I felt uncomfortable in thest few days because the air pollution was very serious , and the air unfresh. It was hot, foggy and unwindy and I really dislike this kind of weather.
I think we should put more effort in protecting the environment from pollution. Air pollution is such a big problem that no one can take it lightly. Factories have to try their best to reduce the emission of waste gases. By doing so, I hope we can improve the environment very soon.


2007-09-18 10:44:05 補充：
對唔住！手快快，"the air unfresh"在air前沒有the

2007-09-18 10:48:40 補充：
其實”the air pollution was very serious, and air unfresh"這句是為了保留你的意思，其實可以更簡單地說：because air was seriously polluted.就可以

Recently, I feel uncomfortable with the bad weather. The weather is hot, fog and no wind. The air pollution is reached to high level. I dislike this kind of weather and only want to have blue sky and fresh air to breathe freely.

I think we should take some actions to improve our living environment. Air pollution is one of big problems now because it affects our breathing and mood. Thus, the first thing to do is reduce the level of air pollution. I hope that factories could alert this big problem and keep to reduce the level of pollution. Also, we should behave ourselves to save the environment and finally blue day appears again.

I felt very uncomfortable in the past few days. The air pollution level was so high. I felt the weather was not fresh. The weather was hot, foggy and not windy at all. I dislike this kind of weather.

I think we should protect our environment , reduce environmental pollution level. Air pollution is a big problem, I think human should confront this problem seriously. I hope the factory can control the level of waste gas being produced. I hope we can improve our environment .

These few days, the weather was so hot and foggy, the air pollution level was high. It made me feel very uncomfortable and i really don't like this kind of weather.
I strongly think that we should protect out environment and reduce the level of environmental pollution.
As air pollution is becoming more and more serious, i think we should try to solve the problem , for example, by reducing air pollutants.
I hope we can all take parts in improving our environment.