改gramma [急]10分

In the future , people will move to space to live because of the serious air pollution on earth (地球裡面沒有空氣污染,,外面先有..所以用on).Human beings will live in different celestial bodies.They could fly on the bridges to go where they want to go.The celestial bodies in the centre is the ccentral authorities of this city.People can get there by flying in the tunnel of LOVE.

上面前輩講得冇錯,,你已經作得好好架喇=]

In the future, people will move to space (to live) because of the (serious) air pollution (on) Earth.People (will) all live (on) different celestial bodies.They (can) fly on the bridge to go to the (places where) they want to go.The celestial body in the centre is the central authorities of (the) city.People can get there by flying in the tunnel of LOVE.

In the future, people will move to space (to live) because of the (serious) air pollution in the Earth. People (will) all live in different celestial bodies. They (can) fly on the bridge to go to the place(s) (where) they want(ed) to go. The celestial body in the centre is the central authorities of this city. People can get there by flying in the tunnel of LOVE.

基本上來講已經是好好嫁啦.............
希望可以幫到你..................