請幫我改這一句

2007-09-16 12:30 am

如果有個客人叫我打開本書的包裝比佢驗查下,而我想同佢講:你可以打開,但打開後若沒有問題,你一定要買這本書.
If the books is right when you open the package ,you must buy it .

請講我錯了什麼....

回答 (5)

2007-09-16 12:36 am

✔ 最佳答案

你錯在這是一句中文的英文,

應該說成:

you are going to buy this book if the book is fine after you checked it.

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2007-09-16 3:43 am

the books => the book

Sir/Madam, you have to buy this book after you open the package and check it alright.

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2007-09-16 12:46 am

Sir, once you open the package and have checked it without any problem, you have to buy this book.

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2007-09-16 12:40 am

you should use "book" instead of "books.

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2007-09-16 12:35 am

Sir, you need to purchase this book if the book is without any problem or damage upon opened.

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