english grammar--------urgent

grammar is not correct

hire is the verb
Mr. Lee is the subject
the subject (Mr. Lee) is the 3rd person singular
3rd person singular needs an "s"; at the end of the verb. (hire)

the corrrect one should be: Mr. Lee wants to hire a retailer

chart:
singular:-------------------------------- plural:
1st person- I (no "s";) -------------1st person- we (plural, no "s";)
2nd person- You (no "s";) --------2nd person- you (plural, no "s";)
3rd person- him/her ("s") ---------3rd person- them (plural, no "s";)

want==> should be "wants" 第三身~

其實你係咪想講....李先生想聘請一個零售商???
如果係的話.....香港學生...真係太鍾意咩都係...「我想...」「我想...」.....咩都用I want...he/she wants......港式英文....
我建議用"would like".....感覺上好少少~
Mr. Lee would like to hire a retailer.

2007-09-13 23:27:08 補充：
...點解亂碼..[want] should be [wants]!i suggest use [ would like]

Mr.Lee wants to hire a retailer.

want要加s

Mr. Lee wants to hire a retailer.
(第三身單數)