唔該!幫手作200字英文作文!!十萬火急!!!(20點!!)

以下作文是自己作架,所以好差,但希望幫倒你^^
I have so many hobbies, let me tell you some of them.
My hobbies include arts and physicals. Let me tell you the arts first. I love drawing, espically cartoon. I take a drawing lesson every Monday. Then it's time to talk about physicals. The sports that i like are badminton and football. I love playing badminton with my classmate. and i alway practise it every Sunday. I also love playing football, and my favourite football team and football player is Liverpool and Lampard.
I also wish that i can be a football player after i am an adult.
唔夠ニ百字,但係你可以自己加D字同修改

我唔會講：因為你的興趣我唔知，不過可以同你講點作：
１．你要講你興趣係咩？
２．你要講ｙ你ｌｏｖｅ？

My hobbies are make models and playing computer games.I make models every week.I like marking models because it is so interesting and is not boring.So I have many models at home.But the models are so expensive.Making models is good for children so I make models every week. I play computer games every day.I like playing computer games because it is exciting and fun.I like playing exciting games in my computer.But playing computer games is not good for children.So I like making models more than playing computer games.