英文語法, 幫我睇睇有冇錯^^

most (Most) of you have your own idol. someone (some) likes (like) foreign singers, (and) someone (some) likes (like) japanese singers. and who (the one) i like is a group of taiwanese singers called fahrenheit. maybe you will think fahrenheit this name( the name, fahrenheit) is quite strange.

different seasons have different climates( The climate would certainly change in four season, so i think it's very special to use "fahrenheit" to be their group (band's) name (in order to associate the band with their characteristic of diversity). they are not only singers but also actors. i believe some of you may have watched their films or listened to their songs.
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i think some of you may know (may have heard of )a taiwanese tv programme calles (called) "the x family". fahrenheit has sung many new songs for this tv programme. and they haven't sung new songs for a long time ( don't use already), so i must buy the (soundtrack) cd of the music of this tv programme.
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in (Among) four of them, i like jiro best. i was first attracked (attracted) by him in a famous taiwanese programme called "it started with a kiss". i started to find out more information of him at that time.
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he is a very cheerful person. he won't give up the things that he wants to do. and he can always make people feel happy. i think this kinds of person is very hard to come by. and of course i think he is very handsome.
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of (Of) course, fahrenheit is not the best (to you), but i will always be supporting them. t(T)his is the end of my presentation, thank you!
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請不要介意capital letter 的問題..

(1st sentence).....foreign singers, someone "like" japanese singers.
(3rd supplement) I was first "attracted" by him.......
(4th supplement) I think this "kind" of person....to come "across"."Of
course" I think.......
(5th supplement) " Without a doubt, Fahrenheit may not be the best"
in your mind.........