幫我check gramma ,thanks

The main character(算錯字) of this book is Scrapman (你本來的句子是:這本書主要角色是Scrapman, 沒有'的'.) He was(用past tense) a robot(=mechanical man), invented(invented比made更好, 因為invent是發明, made只是造) by Winston. However, Winston thought(用past tense) he was(漏了verb) silly and created a new invention afterwards(before long[不是before Along]是指不久之前). Then he discarded(棄置) Scapman to the scrap-yard. He didn't(用past tense) care and Scrapam(本來你沒有加賓語) and ingored him. Scrapman(算錯字) was(英文文法不用I FELT sad, 用I WAS sad) lonely as(when是指'當', 但他常常也在scrap-yard內. 'as'指'因為') he was alone in the scrap-yard. One day, he found a lot of waste material. He created his own invention, a Scarp-cat. Scrapt-cat brought him happiness(算錯字)(帶給他喜悅). After that, Winston knew Scrapman was clever. Finally they were(算錯字) very(算錯字) happy(happiness是noun, happy才是adjective)

我覺得這篇文章是小三程度的同學作的. 因為我得多grammatical mistake 同算錯字, 文法又不大通順. 又沒有用interesting vocabularies.

The main charater in this book is Scrapman. He is a mechanical man , who made by Winston. However, Winston think that he was silly and made a new invention before along.Then he put Scapman to the scrap-yard . He didn't care and ignored Scrapam. Scrapam felt lonely when he was in the scrap-yard alone. One day, he found a lot of waste material. He made his own invention,which a Scrap-cat. Scrap-cat gave him happiness.After that, Winston knew Scrapman was clever.Finally, they were very happy together.

I think it's Form 1 or Primary 6 work. Isn't it?

The main character in this book is Scrapman. He was a robot, made by Winston. However, Winston thought he was silly and invented another robot.Then he put Scapman in the scrap-yard . He ignored Scrapman and didn't care about him anymore. Scrapman felt lonely in the scrap-yard. One day, he found a lot of waste material. He made his own invention, a Scrap-cat. Scrap-cat brought him happiness. After that,Winston knew that Scrapman was clever. Finally, they lived happily together.

I think this is a P.6 or a F.1 student's work. Am I right?

中一,,
GRAMMAOK多錯
同意VOCAB有D深,唔似小六

中一,因為d字幾難下