(迅速!!!)英文自我介紹

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Good morning (afternoon)!
My name is Tony. I am XX years old. I study in the YY Secondary School. I have quite a lot of hobbies (嗜好) such as swimming, playing football, painting (繪畫) and surfing (瀏覽) in the internet. Like many other teenagers (青少年), I love playing computer games very much. However (不過), I have promised myself that I should spend more time in studying, no more the computer games in the new school term (學期). My favourite (喜愛的) subject (科目) is AAA as it is interesting. Our school building (建築) is beautiful while the campus (校園) is delicate (雅緻的). After school, I like staying at the school library. Sometimes, I play football or basketball with my classmates when the playground is available (可以用). Later on (遲些兒), I plan to join some extracurricular activities (課外活動). But, there are so many groups (小組) and clubs (會社) in the school, not yet to decide which is good fit (適合) for me. How about you all? Have you made up your mind (決定) to join any of them? Maybe (也許), we can take part (參加) together (一起).
That ' s all. Thanks everybody!

2007-09-10 20:14:21 補充：
Tks for the great support & adoption in person by Tony Chow!

for入學?

第一段
My name is (名). I currently study at (學校) taking (科目).再講下點解想入呢間學校

第二段
講d有建設性既興趣同以前有參與既活動(童軍之類都可以架)之後就要講呢樣野點樣可以突出你自己 eg.
I have take place in the Young Enterprise program in the past year working as the Finance director. Through this program I have learnt how to involve and play as a team worker, act as a team leader, and the logical mind to deal with numbers.

之後可以講下sports呀之類如果你有意入校隊都可以既..不過非必要唔好加d太casual既興趣.冇乜建設性.

最後再補充點解想入間學校之類囉