緊急!!!有無人可以幫我改吓篇文~~~~呢篇文係介紹我暑假果陣時去左九寨溝&黃龍,寫得5係好好,請多多指教(有3題)

The 'World Wonder' and 'Fairy Land on earth' are the names which called by the tourists who come to Huang Long Scenic and Historic Interest area. People come here to see colorful lakes, snow covered mountains, valleys and virgin forests. We took cable car to the top of Huang Long and walked down the mountain. Although it was very hard, I could see many beautiful views.