幫番易,最好增加強點情感

2007-09-04 7:14 am
唔知還有沒有更好的情感可以令讀書更加回想smorking呢?
我有一個夢,每個人可以過著公平的日子.我有一個夢,每個人可以明白身邊人的想法,我還有一個夢,就是人世界看不見煙的足跡!

我的夢希望可以轉變為理想,對於吃煙的人來說這是對,哪麼對於無辜的人來說又是什麼呢?

其實我都唔係幾識寫作,若果有更好多意見希望可以教教小弟~
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我的夢希望可以轉變為理想,對於吃煙的人來說這是對,哪麼對於無辜的人來說又是什麼呢?

回答 (2)

2007-09-04 12:31 pm
✔ 最佳答案
I wish everyone lives in equality. I wish everyone understands each other. I also wish everyone could live in a smoke-free environment!
I hope my wish will come true. Smokers do not feel quilty about smoking. However, what are the implications imposed on the innocent people who are inhaling their second-hand smoke?
2007-09-04 8:08 am
i have a dream, all the people liveing in the fair, i have a dream, everybody could understand each other, i also have a dream, no smoking in the world.


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