原句: Users can access network resources locally on their LAN, they may also access resources remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN
我簡化了的句子:
Users can access network resources locally on their LAN,remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN
我這樣改對嗎?
原句是否可以再簡化?
簡化英文句子 10分
2007-09-03 6:05 am
回答 (3)
2007-09-03 6:32 am
✔ 最佳答案
comma後面個句冇左verb..remotely只係adv..
所以應該寫作：
Users can access network resources locally on their LAN or access remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN
如果驚有太多or係一句句子到..不妨將or變作but can also
p.s.如果想用as well as..都要比番個v.
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2007-09-03 6:32 am
Users can access network resources locally on their LAN, as well as remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN
2007-09-03 6:11 am
在comma後加連詞可能好一些
Users can access network resources locally on their LAN, and remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN.
或
Users can access network resources locally on their LAN, as well as remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN
Users can access network resources locally on their LAN, and remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN.
或
Users can access network resources locally on their LAN, as well as remotely across a city or the world over a MAN or WAN
參考: me
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