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Obviously,Ivin ' s biggest shortcoming is not willing to listen to friend's advice, therefore he obtains the bad result.

Obviously, the Ivin biggest shortcoming is not willing to listen to friend's advice, to has today.

顯然地, Ivin最大的缺點是不肯聽取朋友的忠告, 至有今日.

Distinctly, Ivin the biggest shortcoming is not willing to listen to friend's advice, to has today

It is apparent that refusing friends’advice is Ivin’s big weakness lead to today’s result.
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2007-08-29 14:31:18 補充：
修正It is apparent that refusing friends’advice is Ivin’s biggest weakness lead to today’s result.

clealy,lvin's defect is don't listen her friend's sincere,so,she will regret.

apparently, lvin'sbiggest shortcoming is that he does not want to listen to others