我d英文好差...想搵人幫手...你睇下我下面依句有冇問題?
我想寫係:這本書說給我們一個道理,如果你有幫助有需要的人,你會感到愉快
This book tell us a truth,if you have helped a need,you will feel happy.
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幫我修一修改英文...好短..
2007-08-27 4:51 am
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2007-08-27 5:47 am
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This book tell us that if you help someone in need, you will be happy.＊你用左 if 就唔洗加 have 同 ed ，仲有 happy 唔用 feel , 應該用 will
2007-08-27 17:45:52 補充：
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2007-08-27 4:59 am
This book tells us a truth such that if you help somebody in need, you will feel happy.
參考: Me
2007-08-27 4:58 am
Please use your BRAIN to think . Do homework is use your BRAIN . Always ASK ASK & ASK .
參考: me
2007-08-27 4:55 am
這本書說: 助人會感到快樂
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