幫我修一修改英文...好短..

2007-08-27 4:51 am

我d英文好差...想搵人幫手...你睇下我下面依句有冇問題?

我想寫係:這本書說給我們一個道理,如果你有幫助有需要的人,你會感到愉快

This book tell us a truth,if you have helped a need,you will feel happy.

我唔想你地用英釋中...真係識先好答....我想識既人幫我改一改上面果句....修改得最完美..淺白又易理解....我會給他10分

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用戶167996

2007-08-27 5:47 am

✔ 最佳答案

This book tell us that if you help someone in need, you will be happy.

＊你用左 if 就唔洗加 have 同 ed ，仲有 happy 唔用 feel , 應該用 will

2007-08-27 17:45:52 補充：
sorry打錯左~係be唔係willSORRY牙

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小瓦器

2007-08-27 4:59 am

This book tells us a truth such that if you help somebody in need, you will feel happy.

參考: Me

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用戶176307

2007-08-27 4:58 am

Please use your BRAIN to think . Do homework is use your BRAIN . Always ASK ASK & ASK .

參考: me

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