Please give me some ideas !! essay

the reason for men and women in 35 countries can't read !!!! is that :
1, human progress is not really enough or else not so many people can't read...
2, also if people on this world is really civiled( CAN READ) , it will show in our culture...like Renaissance..
3, therefore even how human progress in technology.but nothing in education...still the people will not be civilized enough...
4, therefore Culture Matters How Values Shape Human Progress.....
5, and now the Culture Matters is not good enough or else..not50% on men and women in 35 countries can't read ..

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