有勞大家幫我翻譯和修改一些英文句子！

1.
I can have a larger business development space.
I will pay attention to like an each matter.
So indicate me to have a sincerity very much to this work.
Thus relatively display my ability, didn't tell a lie.
The meanings indicated some abstractions so.
2.不懂答....因為我think幾好~~

1. I want to widen the field of view and my work experience.

1. 我想要加寬視野和我的工作經驗。
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2. I want to occupy a marketing position in the computer firm.

2. 我想要充任一個營銷職位在電腦公司。

2007-08-24 00:21:30 補充：
I turn the below Chinese □become English: I may have a bigger matter to unfold spatially . I attentively complete each matter. expressed my work has Italy very much. compares demonstrated my ability, has . expresses some abstract meanings.

翻譯
I'd like to have a boarder exposure in my career.

I'll work with my best endeavour.

This shows I'm serious about this job.

This can demonstrate my capability and that I'm not lying.

This is an abstract idea.

修改
I'd like to boarden my exposure and my work experience.

I'd like to apply for a marketing position in a computer firm.
or
I'm interested to work in the marketing department of a computer firm.