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They lighted up the candles and sang the birthday song all together. Edison made a wish at this time that "I wish my parents come back earlier". Then his friends gave him their gifts. Jenny gave him a pen-case, Ken gave him a box of model, Tom gave him a toy car, Mary & Sam gave him a story book. Edison thought "Today is the best day of my life".


Make a wish - wish means something no happen easily, in this case, Edison's parents must be far away from him, might be overseas or somewhere, therefore he WISHED that they can come back as early as they can.


ONE toy car - NO s

ONE story book - although there have more than one story in the book, but there have one book only, so NO s


past TENSE , NOT past TENTS

They lighted up the candles, sang a birthday ong together. In this time, Edison started to make a wish. "Hope my parents can be back home now." He said. Afterwards, his friends gave him present. Jenny gave him a pencil case, Ken gave him a box of puzzle, Tom gave him a toy car, Mary and Sam gave him story books. Edison thought 'today is a best day of my life'.

they lighted up the candle and sang the birthday song together. At this time, edison made his wish:" I hope my parents will come back earlier". After he said this, his friends gave him presents. Jenny gave him a pencase, Ken gave him a box of model, Tom gave him a toy car, Mary and Sam gave him a story book. Edison thought:"today is the best day of my life"