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Since Diana became the Princess of Wales in Britain on 29th July 1981, she has been on the magazine cover pages all the time. Wherever she went, the reporters were there. Whatever clothes she was wearing, it will be at the fashion. Whoever was with her will soon be known by the public because of he paparazzi. She was always be a public person. Although she was rich and popular, she just felt lonely. Her life was totally interrupted by people following her. For the sake of money these people disregarded their target's feeling. At the end of the day, is it privacy and freedom more important to a person? I think we should not stand this kind of selfish behaviour anymore. The legislation should be there to protect everyone.

After Diana became the Princess of wales on 29 July,1981, she was on magazine covers all the time. Wherever she went, the press caught on.Whatever she was wearing, it would have been popular and shown to the public eye, and whoever was with her would soon be discovered because of the paparazzi watching her. She was always being watched. Although she was rich and famous, she still felt lonely. Her life was continuously interrupted by the paparrazi and the media.