麻煩各位幫我修改以下的英文句子，令意思表達得更理想！

Jobi Lam

2007-08-22 11:47 pm

I am seeking a new job is that I wish to widen my experience and take a new turn in my career development.
I would like to learn other job knowledge at my young.
I think the limitations of advancements in a family-run business.
My present career goal is joining marketing position at the car film like yours.
I can increase marketing responsibilities and developing space in the film.
I can involve in works of marketing strategy in the film.

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Carol

2007-08-23 7:22 pm

✔ 最佳答案

I am seeking a new job which I can have more experience and take a new turn in my carerr development.
I would like to learn the knowledge of others jobs when I am young.
I think the limitations of advancement is to work in a company and it controls by the family.
My present career goal is joining marketing position at the car firm like yours.
I can increase marketing responsibilities and developing space in the firm.
I can involve in works of marketing strategy in the firm.

你之前打晒 film....其實就係firm...
My present career goal is joining marketing position at the car film like yours.
幫你改左少少,因為唔太明你想講乜
I can increase marketing responsibilities and developing space in the film.
我唔明你想講乜,所以都唔郁到..

參考: 外國讀書, advanced level of English

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