英文翻譯(超特急)

我已經接受到你的郵件,

不過郵件裡有一些錯誤的資料

這裡有一份正確的資料給你 ,

請檢查及改正




翻譯:



I already accepted your mail,

but in the mail had some wrong material

here to have a correct material to give you,

please inspected and the

correction







Hope i can help you!

I have already received your mail,but there are somethings wrong with it,
Here's a corrcet information ,please check and correct it .thanks a lot.

我已經接受到你的郵件
I had already accepted your mail.

不過郵件裡有一些錯誤的資料
but in the mail have some wrong information

這裡有一份正確的資料給你
here is corrected information to you

請檢查及改正
Please check and correct it


唔知你用係邊到，如果唔係交功課而又想有禮貌d，就試吓用
Thanks for your mail! some information in your mail is to be clarify. would you refer as attached informaion for your consideration?

我已經接受到你的郵件,不過郵件裡有一些錯誤的資料
這裡有一份正確的資料給你 ,請檢查及改正

I already accepted your mail,
but in the mail had some wrong material 或 information,
here is a correct material 或information to give you,
please inspected and correct it.
或
please have a look and make amendments.

※希望幫到你la！※

I have received your mail, but there are something wrong in it. Here is the correct information, please check and correct it. Thanks a lot.
Mistake1:大小階問題
Mistake2:information不用a,他是uncountable
Mistake3:不用this,用your
Mistake4:不用with,用in
Mistake5:要加it在please check and correct .

I have already accepted your mail,but there has some wrong data in this mail.
Here is a correct imformation for you,please check it and correct the mistake.

你的錯誤在於你冇留意' 郵件' 這個字, there are somethings wrong with it,' there ' 指既係咩,個主語無講到. 仲有please check and correct，check 又指check 咩，個主語無講到．
英文翻譯(超特急)
我已經接受到你的郵件,不過郵件裡有一些錯誤的資料
這裡有一份正確的資料給你 ,請檢查及改正
Hope i can help you!

I have already accepted your mail,but there has some wrong data in this mail.
Here is a correct imformation for you,please check it and correct the mistake.

你的錯誤在於你冇留意' 郵件' 這個字, there are somethings wrong with it,' there ' 指既係咩,個主語無講到. 仲有please check and correct，check 又指check 咩，個主語無講到．

I have received your mail, but there are something wrong in it. Here is the correct information, please check and correct it. Thanks a lot.
Mistake1:大小階問題
Mistake2:information不用a,他是uncountable
Mistake3:不用this,用your
Mistake4:不用with,用in
Mistake5:要加it在please check and correct .

I have already received your mail, but there is something wrong with the information.
Here I have the correct information for you. Please take a look at it and make the changes.

2007-08-22 07:55:19 補充：
If you don't wnat to sound like too mean to others, ppl usually use "make the changes" instead of "correct it". I think it sounds more polite to me.

I have already received your mail, but there are some mistakes in your mail.
Here is a correct data, please check and correct it.

2007-08-22 07:41:37 補充：
最後一句可以「please have a look and make amendments」。

I already accepted your mail, but in the mail has some wrong materials
Here has a correct material to give you, please inspect and corrects