請俾d意見..about eng

2007-08-22 1:19 am
In addition, I am the mumber of YMCA Social Service Team where I can take part in different voluntary activities , such as raising money for charity , flag rasing , to visit rest home, cleaning etc. All activities search by ourself , sometimes we will help some charities raising money , we have to go to the class one by one for promote the activities . I think we should have a great caring and patient.

...呢d系我自己作既英文, 唔知大家看唔看得明我講咩呢.? 請俾d意見啊...有咩可以改進既地方...
有更好既請幫我改改啊
很多謝熱心既朋友

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2007-08-22 1:38 am
✔ 最佳答案
In addition, I am a member of the YMCA Social Service Team where I can take part in different voluntary activities, such as raising money for charities, flag raising, to visit rest homes, cleaning etc. We found all the activities on our own and sometimes we help some charity associations to raise money. We have to go to the class individually to promote our activities. I am sure we are caring and patient.
2007-08-22 1:28 am
你作得非常好呀!!不用改啦!!!


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