英文信!!好急呀!!唔該!!

Dear ....

I am F.5...student. My name is...... I am writing to ask for a chance for your permission of allowing me to study BIOLOGY during my repeating F.5 or 4....

I am really interested in this subject and I passed the examination. I hope I can continue to take it during my repeating period. I believe I can obtain much better results in the subject. To handle 7 subjects is easier than 8 subjects, because I can spare much more time and concentrate on the studying on 7 subjects. Therefore, I do believe I can improve not only Biology but also other 6 subjects too.

I hope you can offer me a chance and allow me to take the Biology in the coming year.

Thank you for your kindness and your attention.

Yours ...

希望幫到你.
不過提一句, 為自己前途, 努力d讀好英文, 到時入大學的機會同選擇都大好多.

2007-08-22 16:59:49 補充：
更正 : 由I am writing to ask for a chance for your permission of allowing me to study BIOLOGY during my repeating F.5 or 4....改為 I am writing to ask for your permission of allowing me to study BIOLOGY during my repeating F.(5 or 4)....sorry, 昨日睇唔到呢到有問題.

2007-08-22 17:04:13 補充：
更正 : 由I hope you can offer me a chance and allow me to take the Biology in the coming year.改為 I promise that I will work harder to improve my studying. I hope you can grant me a chance and allow me to take the Biology in the coming year.

I really to do a good interest Branch
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I would certainly-year effort to study efforts
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I believe their results will be progress! !