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2007-08-21 1:51 am
i travelled to guangzhou by train and my aunt came to meet me at the
station.when we arrived at her flat ,i was so tired that i went straight to the bed.

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2007-08-21 5:45 am
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I travelled to Guangahou by train and my aunt (went) to meet me at the station. When we arrived at her flat, I was so tired that I went straight (to bed.)
2007-08-21 2:22 am
i (was)travelled to guangzhou by train and my aunt came to meet me at the
station.when we (arriving) at her flat ,i was so tired that i went straight to the bed.
2007-08-21 2:11 am
My suggestion: ( )

( I ) travelled to guangzhou by train and my aunt came to meet me at the
station. ( When) we arrived at her flat , ( I ) was so tired
( and therefore) went straight to ( bed) .


i === I 一定要大階
to the bed === to bed
參考: self
2007-08-21 1:59 am
i travelled to guangzhou by train and my aunt came to meet me at the
station.when we arrived at her flat ,i was so tired (that) i went straight to (the) bed.

Change to

i travelled to guangzhou by train and my aunt came to meet me at the
station.when we arrived at her flat ,i was so tired (then) i went straight to ( ) bed.

Don't need the!!!
參考: myself


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