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This book was divided into 9 chapters. The story talk about Mei-lin.She had 4 families. One day, she had a new younger brother .He calls Wing-keung. Mei-lin was taking a good care of him. Have once Mei-lin and her family were fishing with the fleet off Cheung Chau.When they fleet at aquatic sail, have a tanker bumped into their fleet. Luckily, they all saved, but they got hurt. They were at the hospital. After Mei-lin recover from illness.

Her father arranged her and Wing-keung to Oi Kwan Children's Recepeption Centre because Mei-lin's father and mother didn’t want to be her burden. Two weeks later. Mei-lin and many children played a slow called ' The Magic Forest '. Mei-lin performed a witch.

A period of time after. Mei-lin and Wing-keung was hungry. They went to McDonald.Mei-lin saw her sister working in there. After a time, when she finish the dancing. She met her family and with they reunion.

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This book is divided into 9 chapters. The story tells about a girl, called Mei-lin. There were 4 members in her family. MEI-lin took good care of her younger brother, Wing-keung .One day, Mei-lin and her family went fishing on a boat near Cheung Chau. When they were sailing, the boat was hidden by an oil tanker. Luckily, they were all saved but injured .They were sent to the hospital. Mei-lin took several days to recover from the injury.

Due to family burden, her father sent Mei-Lin and her younger brother to the Oi Kwan Children Reception Centre. They had stayed there for two weeks. They played with other children in the centre. One day, they played a show called “The Magic Forest”. Mei-lin acted as a witch. After that, Mei-lin and Wing-keung were hungry and went to McDonald for food. They met her elder sister, who was working there. Sometime later, when she (don’t understand here, “she” means Mei-Lin or her elder sister) finished dancing, they met again. They could group their family together once again finally.

I think this story is boring.You can think something fun on it.