希望英語老友們為我批改 +指導 (Advanced Level) 2

2007-08-17 2:25 am
Please tell me how to polish my writing. thx!
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These days I indulge in the participation of yahoo's knowledge+ , from which I can learn the stuff I like most. English, for example, is one of my focuses here as lots of "masters" with incredible knowledge and insight into English are there.

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Most of them are generous to sharing with others, and my knowledge in this field is widely extended. What a helpful resource! I could not help but take part in the game enthusiastically, in the hope that I would be a Doctor in the future.

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2007-08-17 3:23 am
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English, for example, is one of my focuses here as lots of "masters" with incredible knowledge and insight into English are there.
咁究竟係 here 定 there?不如兩處都用 there 好過。但其實可以只用一個,以免太累贅。另外可以將 English 改為 The English section:
The English section, for example, is one of my focuses as there are lots of "masters" with incredible knowledge and insight into English.
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Most of them are generous to sharing with others, and my knowledge in this field is widely extended. What a helpful resource! I could not help but take part in the game enthusiastically, in the hope that I would be a Doctor in the future.
1.Generous to someone,generous in doing something
2.不宜用 game 描述 yahoo knowledge,有人用玩 online game 升級o既心態o黎,不等於呢個係 game。可以用 forum。
3.would be a doctor 人地未必明,不如改為 would be ranked among the doctors on the forum
4.knowledge widely extended 不如用 knowledge greatly expanded,因為唔係講緊幅員/範圍,唔會「擴展」(extend),但會「變大」(expand)
Most of them are generous in sharing with others, and my knowledge in this field has greatly expanded. What a helpful resource! I could not help but take part in the forum enthusiastically, in the hope that I would be ranked among the doctors on the forum in the future.


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