有沒有有心人可以幫我?(緊急)

Chinese version : 加拿大一向響名於令人讚歎的優美及自然環境,在加拿大升學可以讓我在一個良好的環境下去改善和提昇我的英語能力及水平,令學習可以事倍功半。在加拿大廣闊的土地上,更蘊藏着不同的歷史文化,能大大擴展我的視野。
Rockway在加拿大擁有悠久的教學歷史,對於教導國際學生更有豐富的經驗。Rockway有良好的教學,師資優良，據統計顯示，超過九成就讀於Rockway的畢業生於畢業後都能考上心儀的大學,為我的升學道路提供優良的輔助。Rockway還會為學生提供豐富的課外學習機會,令我身心發展及學習各個方面得到全面的發展。
在完成高中課程後,我會繼續進修,直至完成大學課程。畢業後,我會選擇在加拿大或香港工作,除了把我所學到的知識回饋社會,促進社會發展之餘，也能為自己累積寶貴的工作經驗，一舉多得。

English version : The Canadian always sound name in makes one acclaim exquisite and the natural environment, enters a higher school in Canada may let me improve and promote my English ability and the level in a good environment, the command studies may the wasted effort. On the Canadian broad land, is containing the different historical culture, can expand my field of vision greatly.
Rockway has the glorious teaching history in Canada, has the rich experience regarding the guidance international student. Rockway has the good teaching, the teachers is fine, demonstrated according to the statistics, the university which surpasses 90% to go study in the Rockway graduate after graduation can pass an examination admires, enters a higher school the path for me to provide fine auxiliary. Rockway will also provide the rich extracurricular study opportunity for the student, will make my body and mind to develop and studies each aspect to obtain the comprehensive development.
After completing the high school curriculum, I will continue to take advanced courses, until will complete the college course. After the graduation, I will choose in Canada or Hong Kong work, except knowledge back coupling society which will learn me, when promotion social development, can also for own accumulation precious work experience, answer multiple purpose.

CHINESE:我覺得加拿大的環境很美麗,在加拿大升學可以提供一個良好的環境去改善我的英文,令學習可以事半功倍。在加拿大廣闊的土地上,有不同的歷史文化,大大擴展我的視野。
Rockway在加拿大擁有悠久的教學歷史,對於教導國際學生更有豐富經驗。rockway有良好的教學質素,超過九成的畢業生都能考上心儀大學,為我的升學道路提供良好的幫助。rockway還提供豐富的課外學習機會,令我身心各個方面有全面的發展。
在我完成高中課程後,我會繼續進修,直至大學畢業。畢業後,我會在加拿大或香港工作,把我所學到的東西回饋社會及協助社會發展。
ENGLISH:
I thought Canada's environment is very beautiful.Enters a higher school in Canada may provide a good environment to improve my English, the command studies may be twice the result with half the effort. On the Canadian broad land, has the different historical culture, greatly expands my field of vision.
Rockway has the glorious teaching history in Canada, has the rich experience regarding the guidance international student. Rockway has the good teaching innate nature, surpasses 90% the graduates all can test admire the university, enters a higher school the path for me to provide the good help. Rockway also provides the rich extracurricular study opportunity, makes my body and mind each aspect to have the comprehensive development. Completes the high school curriculum after me, I can continue to take advanced courses, until university graduation. After the graduation, I can work in Canada or Hong Kong, learns me the thing back coupling society and the assistance society develops.
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