please help me check the grammer mistakes,thx...

Also they have given some advices to foreigner for sightseeing.One of the virtues of this book is it has a lot of pictures. I think it can attract more foreigner to come to Hong Kong.(or I think it can attract more foreigner travelling in HK.) After reading this book, I have learnt more about this wonderful city,Hong Kong

2007-08-14 15:22:17 補充：
---advice係用to,,5係用'for';. . .---應用''of this bk''....but not'',,in this bk''

2007-08-14 15:22:26 補充：
---你想直接指本book,,,so 應用''it'',,but not ''that''---''come to''同''traveling'',,,意思重複左,二選一---if用more,,,不用加上something,,,coz意思5岩...

呢篇係咪接住之前架？　一開始就用 also 錯晒啦

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Also, they gave advises for foreigners to sightseeing of Hong Kong, one of the virtues of this book it that it contains alo of pictures, which I think can attract foreigners to come visit Hong Kong.

After reading this book, I learned more about the city of Hong Kong