please help me check the grammer mistakes,thx...

does it connect to your other question? anyways i took the liberty to combine the two.

The name of this book is 'Time out - Hong Kong', I think the objective is to introduce Hong Kong to foreigners. This book is very informative, it includes the history, culture, customs and entertainments of Hong Kong; there are also guides for sightseeing.

One of the main attractions of this book is the pictures, (that makes it more interesting), which I believe attracts more visitors to Hong Kong, even I had learnt more about this city after reading the book.

The name of this book is " Time Out - Hong Kong". I think the author is intended to introduce "Hong Kong" to the foreigners. Informations on the history, culture, custom and entertainment spots in Hong Kong can be found in this book. Therefore, I think the book is very informative.

The name of this book is “Time out – Hong Kong”. I think the aim of this book is want to introduce “Hong Kong” to the foreigners. This book is very informative. The book consistes the history, culture, customs, restaurants, bars, shops, arts & entertainment of Hong Kong.

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The name of the book is "Time out - Hong Kong". The aim of the book is to introduce "Hong Kong" to the foreigners, hence this book is very informative, as it consists histories, cultures, customes, resturants, and entertainments of Hong Kong.