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My suggestion as follows:

1.)Why you wish to come to Canada to study at the school and in the programme for which you have been accepted?

-to learn better english in an English-speaking country;
-to widen my scope and explore more explousure;
-the programme accepted is one of the best in the country and worldwide;

2.)Whatis your overall educational goal?
-to learn the required knowldege of my interested subjects;
-to attain my desired achievements;

3.)Why you are not pursuing less expensive alternatives in your home country?
-to learn better english in an English-speaking country;
-to widen my scope and explore more explousure;
-the programme accepted is one of the best in the country and worldwide;

4.) What ties do you have to your home country that will lead you to return home following your course of studies
-not many yet depends on the opportunities here and my home country

5.)How will this Canadian diploma/degree increase your chances in the labour market in your home country?
-quite significantly increase my chances in the labour market in my home country.

請參考some articles from the following網, which should provide some ideas for your essay:

Selection of profiles of international students

http://www.studyoverseas.com/f_canada.htm

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