In the modern society, most people will go after fashionable thing, especially teenagers. As a young people, fashion always arouses my attention in everywhere, in anytime. Therefore, if I have an occasion to work with a famous designer, I will try it.
To begin with, creative industry is becoming imperative in hong kong. The fashion industry is one of most important in creative industry. Therefore, I am of the opinion that it has a great prospect.
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2007-08-11 5:32 am
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2007-08-11 6:47 pm
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it's pretty good, but it kind of not complete. And you said the same point over and over again.When you write an article, you need to brainstorm first, then write a outline so you will know what yo want to say in every paragraph.
The structure of an English essay should include introduction, main content and conclusion.
As your level, a five paragraphs essay is good enough.
The first paragraph is the introduction.
Paragraph 2-4 are the main content.
And the last paragraph is the conclusion.
For the introduction, you should talk about what your main reason, or why is it interesting to write this passage.
In the content, you can say one reason in each paragraph, so there will be 3 reasons. The most important one first.
Then in the conclusion, you sum up your point.
Actually, you are doing pretty good, but you need a conclusion, and need to focus on one point and go deeper in each paragraph.
2007-08-11 5:37 am
嗯....唔錯唔錯,識運用深既英文,80都有90/100
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