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2007-08-11 3:50 am

Please be informed that HK office will be closed at 3:00pm today as HK is hoisted typhoone no.8

Thank you for your kind attention.

Please check and amend! Thanks

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michelle

2007-08-11 6:00 pm

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Please be informed that Typhoon No. 8 is hoisted and the HK Office will be closed at 3:00pm today.

Thank you for your kind attention.

(Reversing the order to make it more presentable)

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A B C

2007-08-11 7:29 am

Please be informed that HK office will be closed at 3:00pm today as typhoon no.8 is hoisted.

Thank you for your kind attention.

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