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Last week , I went to Ocean Park with my parents. It was a god chance for me to have a look at the animals and shows in the park. I am very glad with it. When we arrived there , we saw a lot of people . It was very crowded . Although i had just visited the park for an hour , but i bought lots of souvenirs for my grandparenrs . This trip was very happy for me because it's the first time for me to go to the Ocean Park.

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IN this summer time.i went to 北京~~
there are many food in 王府井大街.
i like eat 北京田鴨~~
it is very yummy~~
And i walked full the 萬里長城~
it is great.
i like it very much~~
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