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hey, no need to be so rude, your English is not perfect either.

Neither do I.

I think you idea is quite good for a F.5 student, you just need to be careful about the Grammer.

Few days ago, When I was watching a movie called "Help our Earth", a main character from the movie suddenly jumped out of the TV and grabbed me, I was so scared. A second latter, I found out that I was in the movie with the character as the character said " Welcome to our dirty Earth". "It's not possible that I came into the movie," I said to myself. However, the character told me to follow him.

I did not know what was going on so I just followed the character. While we were walking, I saw a lot of rubbish and insects all over the place. We keep walking and I was sweating like a pig. " How come it is so hot here? I cant stand the heat anymore". He answered sadly " It's because of you human, only know to trash the earth, water pollution, air pollution etc. are worse and worse in every corner of the earth".

I did not know what to day and the character continued angrily "If you people dont stop trashing the earth, there will be soon a hole on the ozone layer." "I know, but what should I do?" I asked. "Well, you can use less plastic bags, recycle paper, tin can, bottles etc. Also, you can take public transport instead of driving your own car. Just something simple will help a lot."

"That's easy enough, I think I can do it. If I can go back to my real life, I will try my best to do those things, I promise." I said. The character thought that I was willing to change my habits, so he let me came back.

After I cam back, I realized that I had been doing so many things to harm the earth, I felt so bad. Therefore I determined to treasure our earth by doing some simple little things in my daily life and tell all my families and friends to do the same so that we will have a healthy and beautiful place to live on.

A few days ago, when I was watching a movie called ''Help our earth'' at home, the main character of the movie suddenly came out of the television screen. I am so afriad of what had happened in front of me which i could believe it. Later, the character held my hands took me into the movie. “Ooh dear me, what’s happening?”I screamed. The character said “welcome to our dirty earth.”“I thought it is absolutey impossible for me to go into the movie. ”I was so afraid that I could say a word.The character said”hey man, follow me.”
Then, I followed him .
When we were walking, I saw a lot of rubbish around. A lot of insects appearing everywhere.

We were walking until my body sweats a lot. This place's so hot, how come?”I asked the character. He said"it is because of human beings who had done a lot of harms to the earth. for example people will dispose a lot rubbish, discharge air pollution and water pollution.

For worse, it had created a hole in the ozone layer."
I said “yes, I know about that. But what can I do for this.” He said “hum…….you can use less plastic bags and try buying environmental friendly products instead of the ones which harms the environment. Besides, you can also use more public transports instead of using private vehicles.”
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“that’s a good idea. when I go back to real life, I will try my best to do what i could do.”I told him.
I found this issue very serious and important that i realised that I must start changing my lifestyle.

The character considered my attitude and let me to go back to the real life.




F5 student? no kidding la..
ur english level is like kindergarten standard..
do more practice and exercises!!