english介紹自己

Good morning/ good afternoon Miss XXX/ XXX sir and my fellow classmate. My name is翁楚嵐! I'm 11 years old. I live with my father, mother and my grandmother. I usually like to go swimming with my friends, playing msn(surfing the net) and playing online game. My favourite food is chocolate. I'm good at mathematic but very worse on music.

My suggestion is...
Maybe u should add some of your favourite things and things u like and explan it why = coz this passage is quite short for your presentation.

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Good morning/ good afternoon Miss XXX/ XXX sir and my fellow classmate. My name is翁楚嵐! I'm 11 years old. I live with my father, mother and my grandmother. I have a fantastic live. I usually go swimming with my friends, playing msn(surfing the net) and playing online game. My favourite food is chocolate because chocolate is ______and i love collecting ______, because they are______I'm good at mathematic but very worse in music.

Hello . i'm glad(高興) to meet you . I 'm 翁楚嵐 . I'm 11 years old now . I live with my father , mother and grandmother . When l have time , I like to go swimming , chatting on MSN and play online game.I can relexing my body in that time . My favourite food is chocolate . I am good at Maths , but weak in Music . Maths is very interesting , it is defiant (挑戰的)and diverse (多變化的), it make me adorit (聰明).

Hi everyone, my name is 翁楚嵐 and I am eleven years old. I live with my parents and my grandma. I love swimming, chatting on MSN and playing online games. My favourite food is chocolate. I love it very much. I am good at mathematics but weak in music.I always play with my friends and go swimming with them.

My result at school is good. I got 98 marks for mathemics at last term. I am weak in music so that I need to work hard. I will study hard in this summer holiday. I will prepare myself for next year.我係學校既成績幾好..我係上學期數學拎98分..我音樂唔好所以我要努力..我將要溫習多d 同埋努力d 係lee 個暑假..我要準備下一年

My name is 翁楚嵐.I am eleven year olds.I have father,mother and garmother.In my spare time,I would like play msn,online games.I like eat chocolate very much.I am good at Maths,but Iam weak in sing.



I respect( )the most,because he/sha is a polite boy/girl.
我最尊敬( )因為他/她是個有禮貌的男孩/女孩