急!!就黎要見工..但要用英文自我介紹!想各位有心人幫下忙=)感激萬分!!!

Hello, how are you? (~ show that you are friendly with smiles!)

My name is May Chan, I just graduated from secondary school. I found a job posting about a clerk position from your company, and I have applied this position afterward.
I love to learn and I am planning to continue my education, especially in English and anything related to the field.
I am hard working, and easy going person, I believe that I will be a good candidate for this position. (<- Show confidence)
Thank you for your time!


( Try to keep it short and simple to remember, you don't have to make the introduction too complex...relax)

我的英文也不好,但寫了以下一段,希望你的英文(-),我的英文也是(-), 這樣(－－＝＋）
My name is May Chan, born in Hong Kong, now, I am eighteen years old, and I just finished my secondary school on this July, and will continue to study something else for increase the value of myself. I love to learn, can do hard work, easily friendly with each other, but I don’t have working experience.

I learned your company’s clerk recruitment advertising from （xxxx xxxx／ming po / singto/apple daily news/ oriental/ standard ) newspaper on date 27 of this July, so, I wrote an application letter to respond to that advertising, if I can get this job, I trust myself I will do all my best onto this job.