請問有無人英文叻既人幫我對下啱唔啱？

==>my ans:1. who host the ceremony?
==>book ans:The People's Liberation Army hosts the ceremony.

==>my ans:2. How big is the Tiananmen Square?
==>book ans:The area of Tiananmen Swuare is 4,000,000m2

==>my ans:3.When shall we have lunch today?
==>book ans:We shall have lunch today at 1 p.m.
==>my ans:4.Shall we go to the zoo today?
==>book ans:No, we shall not go to the zoo today.



==>my ans:5.Where are we go to in the afternoon?
==>book ans:We are giubg ti tge Firbuddeb City in the afternoon.

==>my ans:6.What can we see in there?
==>book ans:We can see a large collection of paintings, calligraphy, porcelains and other antiques there.

my ans:1. who hosts the ceremony? --------- correct
book ans:The People's Liberation Army hosts the ceremony. ---------- correct
or you can say: The People's Liberation Army does.

==>my ans:2. How big is the Tiananmen Square? ---------- correct
==>book ans:The area of Tiananmen Swuare is 4,000,000m2 ---------- incorrect
it should be: The area of the Tiananmen Square is 4,000,000m2.
or you can say: It's 4,000,000m2 big.

==>my ans:3.When shall we have lunch today? ----------- correct
==>book ans:We shall have lunch today at 1 p.m. ---------- correct
but this would be better: We shall have lunch at 1 p.m. today.

==>my ans:4.Shall we go to the zoo today? -------------- correct
==>book ans:No, we shall not go to the zoo today. ------------ correct

==>my ans:5.Where are we go to the afternoon? ------------- incorrect
it should be: Where are we going this afternoon?
==>book ans:We are giubg ti tge Firbuddeb City in the afternoon. ----------- incorrect
it should be: We are going to the Firbuddeb City this afternoon.
(I am guessing -----Firbuddeb----- is in fact -----Forbidden-----)

==>my ans:6.What can we see in there? ---------- incorrect
it should be: What can we see there?
==>book ans:We can see a large collection of paintings, calligraphy, porcelains and other antiques there. ----------- correct