Does anyone can help me ?

呢題係2007年AL 第4題
都係高考生死得最慘重的一題
答呢題題目一不小心就會葬身於F/U之中

我自己都係答呢題
雖然唔高分..得個C
但係都可以講少少比你參考下GE

呢條係NARRATIVE + DESCRIPTIVE的題目
係一題半STORY，半ARGUMENTATIVE的題目
做呢條題目
一定要講 1 個故仔，係自己作GE故仔
講了一個/一群老人家點樣比人呃
但記住:「about AN incident that took place recently 」一定係一個
寫多個一個即刻88
呢個故事要對TENSE同埋要夠合理
故仔一定用PAST TENSE
講下D祈福黨的行為...點呃佢地 +個VICTIM LOSS左D咩 LOR

之後就係MEASURES
有2樣野要注意
1) 你係OWNER ASSOCIATION..唔係警方...唔好答D咩...PATROL..加強查可疑人士..
因為你一定要答對身份
你係業主法團..你可以做D咩?
2) 對TENSE
係你地 HAS TAKEN的東西
做左GA LA....千其唔好答WILL...GOING TO等東西...........

可答...POSTERS....COOPERATE WITH GUARD COMPANY.....ETC...

1POINT 1 PARAGRAPH
答好D ORGANIZATION..要C唔難

2007-07-25 12:39:48 補充：
ur story should have the following components:BackgroundDescribe the old ppl and the gang by their charactersFlow of the incidentYou should tell how the victim trick the old ppl and what the old ppl had given to them

2007-07-25 12:40:56 補充：
Things loss for the victimyou should both include tangible thing like money and intangible thing like sadless etcAnd for your pointsyou should:state the measures has taken (perfect tense)Descibe what exactly has takenWhy taken and predicted outcome

2007-07-25 12:43:00 補充：
for the conclusionyou should paraphrase the incidentalso the measures given and at the end you can also state" I hope that those criminals will be soon found guilty and the old ppl will not be tricked again" Something like thatRemember this is a letter...you should sign properly

2007-07-25 12:44:52 補充：
Measures I have used 1) Get posters from police force and stick in the area of the estate to alert the old ppl2) Cooperatw with police force to hold talks and seminars for teaching the ppl how to aviod being tricked3) Compromise with guard company for a tighter patrolling.

it is 2007 hkale question.l answers this question and got B
My suggestions are as follows:


1) write about your purpose of writing(as the receiver is hong kong post)
2)create an incident that involves money(USING PAST TENSE as it has taken place)
3)the victims are the old
4)describe the method of tricking.what the victim lost
5)measures:
note : from the question ----your association HAS TAKEN to protest peope from being tricked in future

the present perfect tense used here means that it has been implemented(USING PRESENT PERFECT TENSE is more suitable)

e.g
1.regular police patrol
2 distribute leaflets, organise seminars more often
3eduaction

in this topic, the tense used and the organisation of ths ideas are more important than the difficulty of the words used

hope it can help you