有無英文勁o既人可以幫我睇睇有無錯 Grammar?

Joyce

2007-07-23 4:18 pm

1) Three hundred thousand people were killed or twenty thousands people were killed during Nanking Massacres? The actual number of victims reported by Chinese officials and Japanese officials was different; it was still a miserable.

2) For years of suppressed anger and hatred, and eventually erupted in violence to civilians in Nanking.

3)They saw the Chinese as subhuman beings, so the murders of Chinese people would not have against their moral.

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用戶207122

2007-07-23 4:31 pm

✔ 最佳答案

1) Firstly, I think "miserable" is actually "mistery". And I think it is better to say killed IN the massacre(s).

And it can be improved as follows:

Were there three hundred thousand people or just twenty thousands killed in the Nanking Massacre? The number reported by the Chinese and Japanese Officals were different; it's still a mystery.

2} make the following changes: For years of..., "IT" eventually erupted "INTO" ...

3} Better is: ... so the murder of the Chinese was not against their moral AT ALL.

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