寫英文求職信(會計),可否幫我check 文法? 十分謝謝!

2007-07-21 5:37 am

Dear Sir/Madam,

APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF JUNIOR ACCONTANT CLERK (初級會計文員?)

I would like to apply for the post of 初級會計文員 as advertised on the website of Recruit Online.

i have passed the Principles of Account of the Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination, which is considered equal to the third level of LCCI.

I have took the subject of Principles of Account in my four high-school years. I am familiar with the costing account, double accounting, book keeping and so far.

更新1:

Besides, I have took the subject of economic and got a D in the Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination. Therefore, i understand some economic concept likes the foregin currency.

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I have completed my high school education at Fanling Government Secondary School in March 2007 with five passes in the Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination ( D in Economics and Computer Applications, E in Accounting, Chinese and English)

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and at Hong Kong Taoist Association The Yuen Yuen Institute No.2 Secondary School in May 2005 with seven passes in the Hong Kong Certificate of Education Examination. I would like to take the opportunity to talk with you further about my job application. My contact number is XXX or XXX.

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I am looking forward to meeting with your company soon and sharing more of my skill sets. Thanks for your consideration! Yours faithfully, XXX

回答 (2)

用戶5293

2007-07-21 6:26 am

✔ 最佳答案

1. 首先要明白你和一般求職者基本的錯誤在那裡。(求職信的格式錯誤。收信的人面對數以百計同類信函，一看不合基本格式的便投廢紙箱)
2.A professional look covering letter with resume + photo(imaging is good enough) + mobile phone number是最少要求。
3.Simple and clear description in covering letter is good enough with summary illustration of your academic background. Your potential boss will only interest in whether you have experience or not in your job. As a fresh graduate, you are nobody like your fellow classmates. Therefore, you better mention something special (such as fast hand in learning new job and others with proof) in order to draw his attention for an interview. No need to mention cheap labour is your appeal. Neither do hardworking is authentic to your potential employer.
4.Use the standard function of software(such as Words or Excel) for grammer & spell check before you finalize your letter and resume.
5. Fast response to the advertisement and remember to indicate your availability.
Good luck!

2007-07-20 22:35:20 補充：
You got too many spelling mistakes and wrong use of technical terms such asAccountantJunior Accounting ClerkPrinciples of AccountingDouble entries accountingCost AccountingI am a qualified accountant with professional designation

2007-07-22 01:45:33 補充：
I am already 58

參考: My 35 years employer experience in HK.

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Sing

2007-07-21 6:00 am

基本上，你封 cover letter 冇乜大 grammar 問題，但有些建議:

1. 信中太多以" I "作開始的句子。

2. 信中主耍提及你的學歷，其實可以跟廣告上的耍求作出每點回應。因為你的resume已列出你的學歷。

3. Cover letter 中，可加上你的性格特徵，例如有責任感。(如果唔識寫，可以到一些英文星座 website 參考，呢D website 寫好多人性格句子。)

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