幫我睇我寫d英文有冇錯

I come from xxx Primary School. ╳
I am studing in xxx Primary School.

We like hang out to play games╳
We like hanging out to play games.

My favourite sports are badminton .╳
My favourite sports is badminton.

My name is xxx, I am 11 years old. I live with my father and mother in Kowloon .I come from xxx Primary School. The subject that I like most is Chinese because Chinese is an international language.I usually spend weekends with my family, and sometimes will gather with friends. We like hang out to play games.My favourite sports is badminton .My hobbies are reading,travelling and shopping.

Chinese is not an international langage but English is a international langage.

2007-07-18 16:41:40 補充：
Is We like hanging

2007-07-18 16:44:33 補充：
live in Kowloon with my father and mother .I came from xxx Primary School. English is an international langage.

My name is xxx, I am 11 years old. I live with my father and mother in Kowloon. I am studing xxx Primary School. My favourite subject is Chinese because Chinese is an international language.I usally spend weekends with my family, and sometimes I gather with friends. We like hanging out to play games.My favourite sport is badminton .My hobbies are reading,travelling and shopping.

2007-07-18 16:36:33 補充：
I am studing at xxx Primary School.

My name is xxx, I am 11 years old. I live in Kowloon with my fatheer and mother .I came from xxx Primary School. The subject that I like the most is Chinese because Chinese is an international language.I usally spend weekends with family, and sometime will gather with friends. We like hang out to play games.My favourite sports are badminton .My hobbies are reading,travelling and shopping.

第五行的will可以取消。

第六行的sports are badminton，應改為 sport is badminton.

We like hang out to play games.
like後面要加ing

My favourite sports are badminton .
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