can you help me of my poor English??

2007-07-18 7:34 am
can you help me of my poor English??

Dear Judith ,
How are you?i'm so sorry that i'm late of my E-mail.
i was came back late afternoon because i'm went to a camp,so that i'm was late .
sorry judith!!Please,Don't be angry with me,ok? about the photo of this camp ,
i will send to you to next E-mail.also i this the camp it is very funny
有無錯 Grammar 同其他野?

回答 (4)

2007-07-18 7:41 am
✔ 最佳答案
Yes, quite a number of grammatical mistakes and some wordings are used appropriately.

I have rewritten your email as below:

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Dear Judith,

How are you? I am so sorry for replying your email late. I did not arrive back home till late afternoon yesterday because I have been to camping. Hope you understand.

I have taken lots of good photos during the trip. Will send them to you in my next email!

Regards,
xxx
2007-07-18 5:07 pm
The other comments are ok, but I want to point out one very common mistake.

I went to camping -> this is wrong, same like I went to swimming.

There is no need to add -to-, in front of some activities.

Correct:
I went swimming with XXX
I went camping yesterday
I went shopping

Remember no need to add -to-, if you add -to- in this case, it shows very chinese-english!
參考: myself
2007-07-18 7:53 am
有 Grammer 的問題, 以下是我的建議:

1. i'm so sorry that i'm late of my e-mail
==> I'm so sorry for replying the e-mail to you lately

2. i was came back late afternoon because i'm went to a camp
==> i came back late in this afternoon because i have gone to a camp

3. so that i'm was late
==> 建議可不寫, 因上面已提過自己遲回覆

4. sorry judith!! Please Don't be angry with me. ok?
==> Judith, I am very sorry, please do not be angry with me, ok?

5. about the photo of this camp, i will send to you to next E-mail.also i this the camp it is very funny
==> The activities in the camp is very funny. I will send the photo to you next time.

6. 加多一句結尾語: Best wishes, xxx (your name)

希望以上幫到你啦....
參考: 自己
2007-07-18 7:43 am
This is my suggestion :

Dear Judith,
How are you? I'm so sorry for the late reply.
I came back at late afternoon because I went to camp, so that I was late.Sorry Judith!! Please don't be angry with me, ok? About the photos of this camp, I will sent to you in next email. Also, I feel this camp is very funny.


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